unfinished
It feels to me the story is unedited and unfinished, it has an ending but it's just not edited.
I tried writing a horror story and I would say I did not succeed because I actually couldn't bring myself to properly write the fucked-up stuff, personally found it too revolting to write properly.
There was also a weird thing going on, I literally forget some parts of the plot as I am trying to edit them, then I revisit it and I forgot the other parts, so I can't be sure how the plot is even arranged.
Maybe the story is just forgettable except for some exceptional part but this was my trial to finish writing 120,000 words within a few months.
Hope I can write the next story faster. Honestly speaking, this was hard to publish because it isn't finished properly but I guess I kept my word to myself to finish and publish before March 14th, so at least I got that going for me.
I will be back to finish editing this story after Episode 2 Splitting Sun for The Cyber Masquerade. For the 5 person who downloaded it, thank you for trying it out, I was hoping no one download it because lol, I didn't finish the story properly.
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For You are With Me
Cannibal in a cyberpunk world, forced to eat people.
Status | Released |
Author | SpectreSun |
Genre | Visual Novel |
Tags | Adult, Horror, philosphical, Story Rich |
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